SO, My essay will simply be a short story. What's gunna happen is like 20% true and 80% FANTASTIC. So Meghan and I go on a hike for weight training up Bear Creek. We wanted to make it to Little Hawaii, but weren't too determined, and about 35 minutes into it, I get curious about a little trail that plunges down towards the river, so of course, we take the trail, and it leads us to a most beautiful place. It's PERFECT. It's like a little woodland home, which we could TOTALLY live in!!!!! We planned it all out, here's the cooking space, here's where everyone could sleep, etc. etc. Then I get even more curious, because that's just who I am, and cross the creek and wander up the other side. I find a few more "beds" and am then greeted by this SICK tree. Well it's not really a tree, it's like somehow there was a tree and it fell over and all the roots kinda pulled up out of the ground, but they're all just hanging down. Idk, it's wayy difficult to explain, but it's SOO cool. So here's where it gets unreal. So we're gunna sit on that thing for a bit, and a little gnome is gunna come out. It's his home. Right so here's this little gnome chilling there, chatting with us like it's nobody's business. So from what he's saying and what we've been reading in AP Lit and Comp, we start to think his words sound familiar. muahahaha, the gnome is Emerson! Well Emerson re-incarnated. So like we because close, and we figure out who he is
but from there i don't know what should happen...so yeah that's where I need help. What should the conflict be? How do I end the story?
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hahhahaha i love it
ReplyDeleteOnly you would come up with something so... fantastical, and creative. Sounds great and I look forward to reading the polished story. I will help you with the plot and conflict and stuff in class tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteBring him to BIT
ReplyDeleteHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA............Did I mention I love you! Best idea yet, and so ridiculously you, it's not even funny. As far as the conflict/conclusion goes, maybe you and the Emerson gnome just can't even deal with each other because there are some things of our modern world you don't want to give up (iPods) and E-gnome just can't see why. I'm not really sure how it could end, but maybe you and e-gnome can eventually come to agree to disagree, or something along those lines.
ReplyDeleteGNOME DOME!!
ReplyDeleteI love this Kels... I think it would be cool if maybe "Emerson" took you around the woods and gave you a tour of his home and maybe throw in a couple quotes...... MAYBE OME!! you could do something like. the Emerson that wrote the Essay is the like writter philosiphical Emerson, and the Gnome Emerson is like the other Emerson's Nautre mind.. Like Everything that Emerson wrote about NAture came from that little persons brain. I think that would be so cool if you could somehow do something like that... hmmmm... just thorwiong random things out here though!