This is kind of how I want go to with this essay and talk about time and simplicity and tie it into MY life. I hope I can go far with this and it sounds good. If anyone has anymore ideas for me PLEASE let me know!!! Thanks :)
Thursday, September 24, 2009
Zero Draft...... Not so great
I have some ideas for this essay but I am kind of having a brain block. My idea that I kind of started running with was taking the simplicity perspective of it and comparing one of my busy days and one of my easy days. Then talk about one of me elders and how there life is more complex then mine. Even though I feel like somedays I just can't take anymore, I don't realize that its just going to get even more complex no matter what. It is a part of growing up and we all have to do it sometimes. I think that we as humans can get out of control and take something like time and just waste it doing pointless things. I think that time is a very important thing at that we should really think about. We don't have that much time and we should do what we want to do but make sure we don't waste any of it. Like we all say "Time is precious."
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Christain!!!
ReplyDeleteI think this is a cool idea, but i think it would be evewn cooler if you compared your life to an elders life, and how much MORE complicated it is. personaly i think that nmy life is WAY more complicated than my mom's or my dads, they have everything laid out for them and they know what their doing, and they don't have problems with boys or freiends because they are to mature you know? i think that would be kinda cool. I do agree with the thought that time is precious as well, but something elkse you could do with that is that teenagers LIVE IT UP!! and dults are home every night, and most of them dont live the life they aspire... just another thought....
cool how i contradicted everything you were thinking...
xoxoxo XANTHE
i really like your idea. comparing one ofyour easy days then one of your hard day. i think that is a really good idea and i think that would make a really cool essay. esspecially incorperating the idea of " Time is precious"
ReplyDelete